Persuade me: Kids need longer breaks at school

I think kids should get longer breaks at school. I have three good reasons to back my argument.

Fistly I think kids need longer breaks at school because it would be good for their learning. The reason is they have to much energy in class and all they want to do is go outside and play games.

Another reason is that kids need longer breaks becouse school isn't fun eneymore. Because kids should get the same amount of break as their inside learning at school. 

One last reason is that kids need longer breaks becouse they have to much energy so they don't write as neatly at school.

In conclusion kids nead longer breaks at school to inprove their learning at school.

Thankyou for reading my presuade me writing.